I like the idea, the 8 bit style but there are some little things you might want to look into, one being that there is no way to determine if you are going to walk into an dead end, I started the game with finally finding the way to progress after guessing 3 times which hallway to pick, I also did not feel like I had finished the game so maybe you want to make an end scene screen. But besides that I see your vision and its cute.
I cried, I laughed, I was amazing all at the same time. Can't believe such an action packed game could control my emotions in such ways with such a Oscar worthy story line... Please keep up the great work!
I the idea of a maze seems really fun. However, as it stands it's all down to luck. It would be cool if there was some logic behind the paths you choose. Maybe instead of taking you back to the start a dead end could start a different story branch?
That aside, I thought the scene transitions were really good and the typing text effect was well done also!
This is a great start to a game which has some potential- well done!
I managed to go home and find my wife and little Timmy.
I like the aesthetics, it reminds me of the old Atari adventure games.
Although the lack of sounds and music is missed.
Great game! I did not find any Bug!
Hey there! Don't take my feedback too seriously! I just want to help. This game looks extremely rushed. There are no sprites, and as far as I can tell no real plot (Except for Escape the space prison!)
The dialogue boxes aren't capitalized or punctuated correctly. Every "Dead End" brings you back to the start. Overall a really, really bland game. Looking at your other games shows me this is your main game style.
thank you for your feedback! every dead and brings you back to beginning like you were sent back to your cell. I made this game in bitsy and it's very hard to make Sprites.
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I like the idea, the 8 bit style but there are some little things you might want to look into, one being that there is no way to determine if you are going to walk into an dead end, I started the game with finally finding the way to progress after guessing 3 times which hallway to pick, I also did not feel like I had finished the game so maybe you want to make an end scene screen. But besides that I see your vision and its cute.
there is a end screen it is next to your bed. if you look at the walkthrough, angry smile found the exit :)
I cried, I laughed, I was amazing all at the same time. Can't believe such an action packed game could control my emotions in such ways with such a Oscar worthy story line... Please keep up the great work!
Fun little adventure. Some way to add logical choices would be good plus adding a little music :)
thank you :)
Nice one !
Your game is simple but it works perfectly. Great game !
thank you for playing. i will try to make more games in the near future :)
Contratulations on making a game!
I the idea of a maze seems really fun. However, as it stands it's all down to luck. It would be cool if there was some logic behind the paths you choose. Maybe instead of taking you back to the start a dead end could start a different story branch?
That aside, I thought the scene transitions were really good and the typing text effect was well done also!
This is a great start to a game which has some potential- well done!
thank you! :)
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I managed to go home and find my wife and little Timmy. I like the aesthetics, it reminds me of the old Atari adventure games. Although the lack of sounds and music is missed. Great game! I did not find any Bug!
thank you for playing! i love the aesthetic too. :)
Very nice ending sentence! Perfect ending.
This game dont have bug !But if you can do a music it would be really cool !(btw im very early on game developement so if i say trash thing i'm sorry)
Also for music you can use this:https://boscaceoil.net/
Hope i motivated yo !
thank you! :)
Hey there! Don't take my feedback too seriously! I just want to help. This game looks extremely rushed. There are no sprites, and as far as I can tell no real plot (Except for Escape the space prison!)
The dialogue boxes aren't capitalized or punctuated correctly. Every "Dead End" brings you back to the start. Overall a really, really bland game. Looking at your other games shows me this is your main game style.
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I recommend this program to get started with pixel art: https://www.aseprite.org/
If you don't want to pay for it here is a free duplicate version: https://libresprite.github.io/
Also, no sound effects.
Just a reminder: THIS IS A WEEK LONG JAM not a 3 hour one.
thank you for your feedback! every dead and brings you back to beginning like you were sent back to your cell. I made this game in bitsy and it's very hard to make Sprites.
That makes sense.
this is so cool
Dude, did you make a new account just to upvote this?
he is my little brother
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